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注释这是一篇记叙文。应该先陈述参观的时间和地点,因为是一次有意义的参观,因此,参观的地点应该有所选择,比如纪念馆、博物馆或者现代科技馆等,通过参观,了解历史达到以史鉴今,了解现代科技以感悟科技是第一生产力;然后叙述参观的全过程或者主要过程。因为这是记叙过去发生的事情,时态应该使用过去时。参考范文中,习语in salute意为“表示敬意”;notonly...but also...意为“不但......而且......”;devote one’s life to意为“献身于......”,相当于devoteoneself to。范文On March 5, 2006, under the leadership of our teacher, my classmates and I visited Lei Feng MemorialHall. We stood before the statue of Lei Feng in silent salute for three minutes after getting off the bus.Then we arrived at the exhibition hall. The guide told us that Lei Feng was not only economical butalso worked hard and devoted his whole life to serving the people. All of us were deeply impressed byhis deeds and made up our mind to carry forward “Lei Feng Spirit”! (89 words)